Should have kept going.
Mate seriously, you should have kept at it. I'm not really sure what to make of the trippy part. But the first half of the movie surprisingly caught my attention.
I really loved the voice acting and how you made the characters interact with each other. It made me want to see more of it.
The drawing was fairly decent (I know how hard fbf can be and you did a good job of the animating so I wont nitpick about the artwork)
If you do end up making a longer version/sequel and spend much more time on it then I will defo be interested in seeing it.
Anyways: Good work and gratz on the frontpage ;-)